Nice job, Webby! While I think there's some symmetry issues with the mask and cape, the drawing's still good and the shading even better! I also think you've done a great job of showing how powerful simplicity can be. While there's not a lot of frills here, this is still an outstanding design which leaves a strong impression. Well done!
It meets all the requirements, cape, tech-look, pose gives a sense of a commander of a vast army. What more does it need. I like it.

Thanks Guys! - Symmetry is NOT my strong point...

I tend to rush my drawings and it usually shows...