I would make one suggestion, don't make things to confusing for the reader. With LL's powers fluxing all the time and different ages and costumes and such, it may overwhelm the reader and cause them not to get attached to the character and story. Give them little bits at a time. As far as the drawings, I assume these are lose sketches and not final works. Your artist has a Disney type style which is fine, but in his pics, he always cuts the feet off. That tells me he doesn't know how to draw feet.

I would make one suggestion, don't make things to confusing for the reader. With LL's powers fluxing all the time and different ages and costumes and such, it may overwhelm the reader and cause them not to get attached to the character and story. Give them little bits at a time. As far as the drawings, I assume these are lose sketches and not final works. Your artist has a Disney type style which is fine, but in his pics, he always cuts the feet off. That tells me he doesn't know how to draw feet.

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  well force take a look at the other sketches...he can draw feet...also i have seen his work on comicspace.com yeah these are near final...i sent him back my reviews and pointed to the changes..he was just offering me different versions and i posted all of these as they were...but trust me i wont give away much more info about fruit force until its ready

well force take a look at the other sketches...he can draw feet...also i have seen his work on comicspace.com :mallet: yeah these are near final...i sent him back my reviews and pointed to the changes..he was just offering me different versions and i posted all of these as they were...but trust me i wont give away much more info about fruit force until its ready

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  :DD:Well I said it before ,Good Hire!

:DD:Well I said it before ,Good Hire! :mallet:

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